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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-08-24 08:27 PM



money power laughs
a partner refines them all
as life's only lens

accept your wisdom
when indulgence dulls the soul
store each life in time

accept your freedom
you will know more than you think
when caretaking ends

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1 posted 2003-08-24 09:24 PM


I don't know about those other things, but one thing I'm sure of: The wisdom has not passed you by.

This is excellent.

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Martie
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2 posted 2003-08-24 09:44 PM


icebox

Your pondering is always so deep, and I feel like I understand, and hope that I do.  

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-08-24 11:07 PM


caretaking eh..great words my friend
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Gaia
4 posted 2003-08-24 11:15 PM


some never ask
some never observe
some never learn

you do

Patricia
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5 posted 2003-08-24 11:42 PM


accept your freedom
you will know more than you think
when caretaking ends

This is wonderful, no doubt about it. I learn so much from your words.  

Patricia

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6 posted 2003-08-25 12:20 PM


accept your wisdom
when indulgence dulls the soul
store each life in time

Each word of yours is like delving into a treasure chest~
Reminding me of keepsakes, ever precious and so few.



Jason Lyle
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7 posted 2003-08-25 12:24 PM


Another very insightful and cool write.

Jason

Nan
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8 posted 2003-08-25 09:33 AM


We can ask... for anything - as long as we're prepared for "any" answer... Wisdom inevitably compounds with each new venture...

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-08-25 09:39 AM


"accept your wisdom
when indulgence dulls the soul
store each life in time"

~ Ah, yes! But alas, several of mine past lives beg to be recongnized at this time!-- and it can be a might bit confusing! lol


EA

SharaRose
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10 posted 2003-08-25 10:09 AM


accept your freedom
you will know more than you think
when caretaking ends

These are words I have been told at other times, and they *always* give me strength!! Thank you for reminding me of these strengthening words!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-08-25 10:48 AM


icebox
You said a mouth full, enjoyed.

Suede
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12 posted 2003-08-25 10:56 AM


Transcribed perfectly, understood to a degree of completion, excellent
garysgirl
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13 posted 2003-08-25 11:15 AM


Iceman, you are so full of wisdom.
Thanks for sharing it with us.  
Hugs  
Ethel

angelblueyes
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14 posted 2003-08-25 12:28 PM


You always give me such great insight and wisdom.You truly shine in your writes.
Crystal

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