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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-08-24 07:53 PM




I don't
think
I can
begin
to comprehend
this
looking right
through you
knock
me
right
off
my
feet
deja vu
feeling

I
could
never
look
anyone
straight
in the eye
without
hiding
behind
castle walls

My feelings
heavily
guarded
by more
than
a
fire
breathing
dragon

My
insecurities
are dealt
out
on
the round table

My heart
is
like
The Siege Perilous
just
calling
out your name
just waiting
for
you
to take
your
rightful
place

Merlin's
whispering
in my
dreams
telling me
I'm
right
where
I'm
supposed
to be
when
I'm looking
right
through
you and
when you're
looking
right
through
me....


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-24-2003 07:56 PM).]

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gemjop
Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
1 posted 2003-08-24 08:28 PM


i swear, i just replied to this, i did, i hit the submit reply button, ugggg summats up with my computer.

anyway, i shall type this again,

one of your best Kris,
the ending lines really nailed it, stunning images and emotion throughout.

always good to read you.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Kielo
Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109

2 posted 2003-08-24 08:31 PM


If I felt coherent enough to speak sense through my stunned-ness, I would. As it is, I'll just echo gemjop. Extremely well done!

Kielo

I'll never forget you....

Ceinwyn
Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
3 posted 2003-08-24 08:38 PM




such sweethearts you are!! thank you so much...always makes me smile and feel better to know I'm atleast good at something

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-08-24 10:48 PM


Kris . . . smile . .  

awaken . . .
xxoo

(beautiful writing as always)
Goddddd . . .
xxoo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
5 posted 2003-08-24 11:03 PM


Ever have vuja dei? the feeling youve never been here before? ~Robin Williams
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-08-25 11:18 PM


"Merlin's
whispering
in my
dreams"

~ How enchanting... I always enjoy your poetry, Kris!

Lovin' hugs,
Linda


catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2003-08-25 11:20 PM


Much enjoyed this, you have a way with your words.
Sandra

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