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Open Poetry #28

Emotions (20 or less)

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-08-24 06:11 PM

*
~ ~ ~
still waters hold a calm within
the
depths of passionatenesses
until
raging tides rise the heights
that
overflow overwhelming emotions
~ ~ ~
*

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-08-24 06:16 PM

---oh, how I love those "raging tides"!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2003-08-24 07:38 PM

You are developing a unique style that is very pleasing. Enjoyed the verse...the tides continue to rise and fall, as the chest fills with each breath in and out. Well done. TD

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

3 posted 2003-08-24 07:41 PM

*smile* As long as it's a happy passion, I love this feeling.

This poem is very cool. I'm not sure why I say it that way, but it seems to fit.

Kielo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-08-24 08:12 PM

stillness deep under the raging, hard to hold silent, yes, glenn, yes

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