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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-08-24 03:38 PM


Past has taught me well about my
future an present

so to be assured that my past does
not become my present

I review the following with the one
that has said I love you

are we? and do we have?

compassion ~ companionship

communication ~ compatiblity

congeniality and commitment

Then and only then will I say

I'm in love



        

[This message has been edited by QjQ (08-24-2003 05:11 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-08-24 03:50 PM


Seems you learned your lessons well!


EA

Magnus
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2 posted 2003-08-24 06:46 PM


Sounds like a well thought out plan to me.
Too bad we don't always follow such a plan
when we are young and hormones are raging
through like the 40 day flood...

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-08-24 07:40 PM


yes, glenn, but it's not that easy.....you can't put in nicely into little boxes of what's supposed to be....sometimes it just happens against the odds......
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-08-25 01:17 AM


Nice thoughts...James
Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-08-25 09:01 AM


QjQ - a lesson well written, seems you have learned from before, but not I it seems...

BC

minoune
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6 posted 2003-08-25 09:02 AM


excellent... everything needed to be the foundation of two people in love...

minoune

timothysangel1973
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7 posted 2003-08-25 09:13 AM


Sometimes...these things come after your heart throws you off the cliff...

But yes, it is good to have these things, and then again...love is a very powerful emotion that often puts everything else in second place!

Great write sweet man!

Sunshine
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8 posted 2003-08-25 02:33 PM



So many good comments...
it's nice to have a plan...
just don't let a mouse get close...

SharaRose
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9 posted 2003-08-25 03:00 PM


These are all very good qualities, but they have to be given by both. Love is a two-way street. It takes work by both people.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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