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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-08-24 02:40 PM


In the light
   of clouds dispursed

   dreams came alive

   two hearts found
   their troubled souls
   where lives survive

But life would storm
   and questions grew
lifelessly warm
   and empty blue

Heaven's rain
   overpowered

   falling bright skies

   with torn heart
   life un-simple
   unheard good-byes

Then life so passed
   and answers knew
that pain held fast
   won't forget you

Now returned
   memories past

   so longed ago

   with worn heart
   unforgotten
   longfully so

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

1 posted 2003-08-24 04:41 PM


"Heaven's rain
   overpowered

   falling bright skies

   with torn heart
   life un-simple
   unheard good-byes"

The complications, they'll get ya everytime!     Led me towards a bit of pondering this afternoon.  A scary prospect some days.  But I did enjoy yours...

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-08-24 04:48 PM


O
the things that
flow
from handled
pen..

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2003-08-24 07:47 PM


UNforgottten, UNdescribable, UNunusal,
UNcomparable......just how i like to leave
a man...............

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-24-2003 07:47 PM).]

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2003-08-27 01:55 PM




ME~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-08-27 02:07 PM



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