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alright then, we'll have a go of this... it's a thing about loss
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alright then, we'll have a go of this... it's a thing about loss |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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The style reflects a bit of Martie who needless to say has been a huge influence in my work, the artsy look comes from my mother in law's "dislike" for the boring prose format, her and Nancy would get along great. (English teachers, doncha love 'em). The title phrase "...like a faery," used by permission. (Rosemary J. Gwaltney) and if you are interested in that piece... it can be found at... http://www.angelfire.com/mo2/goldleavesinwinter/opearlofmine.html ... like a faery all that’s left are these few pieces of Kodachrome laced throughout a withered album and as the years roll by I feel so much more the missing many but I'll be seeing you again as always you keep me hanging like a faery in the spoil of dream & reminisce where reflections paint my wander and you meet me under the wind of October and we go walking again in sand of remember down by the willow when the leaves of crispy come & aren't you a bit nippy here wear my coat come on lets watch the leaves float ... away away ....... away hanging like a faery Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... ~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~ [This message has been edited by lucky (08-24-2003 02:45 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"you meet me under the wind of October and we go walking again in sand of remember down by the willow when the leaves of crispy come & aren't you a bit nippy here wear my coat" This screams with imagery.. Love it! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yes!!! I'm certainly glad that you had a go at this, as it is wonderful, and I like the layout...I'll be eagerly waiting for more now...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! Lucky, I loved this read, and the form. Hope Martie reads this one, and Nan too! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
BRAVO from me, too! This is lovely to read and to look upon. WOW! Clap Clap Clap Clap always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Kaoru, I've seen your work too... your a progressive learner might I add. thank you. Sunnyone, Nice to see you got out of Camelot for a minute. You surprize me, haven't you been here as long as I..? Thanks so much. Midnitesun, No doubt Martie and Nan will..! They read everything you know... Even if they don't always say so... Janette, Thank you so much too, you are all so wonderful. It's nice when someone drops a line and says so. love all, dale [This message has been edited by lucky (08-24-2003 02:43 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
lucky/Dale We walk the same path so many times....and it leads to the photo album, which leads to the memory, which brings it back like it was real...and is with your words. Hugs as always to you and Rg, for being part of the life I have with those memories. You are both so special to me! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
What exquisite sorrow some tender memories bring! What careful craft you use in bringing them to light. A great gift you have, my dearest. |
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