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ljossberir
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0 posted 2003-08-24 12:16 PM



All my life I sought the why and wherefore,
not the here, not the more
taunted, sober and poor

Now death's hand spawns a nihilistic dream
the ultimate irony:
everything is at seems

Everything is nothing and the other way
around
devoid of right and of reason quiet and
bound

Though much time was wasted, I hold no
disdain - Infact, I'd do it again
what a valiant effort, what a high class game!

[This message has been edited by ljossberir (08-24-2003 12:17 AM).]

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-08-24 12:58 PM


Great write, sir. *tips hat*
Nan
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2 posted 2003-08-24 11:19 AM


No regrets - That's a good thing - and there are some pretty introspective words here, sir berir...
Janette
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3 posted 2003-08-24 12:01 PM


"devoid of right and of reason quiet and
bound"

Excellently stated.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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