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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-23 10:56 PM

I poured
myself
another shot
of redemption

and thought
This time
I'll get
it right

though in truth
I actually
heard
the echo
of my lies

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-23 11:00 PM

Well, I'd copy my favorite parts, but the whole thing is great.

REally enjoyed this, I'm saving it.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-08-23 11:03 PM

can't get away from yourself, huh?
switch the drink

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

3 posted 2003-08-23 11:17 PM

"I actually
heard
the echo
of my lies"

Now there's a powerful statement ... Gulp!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-08-24 09:31 AM

Jason,
aha love the first stanza . . .
actually you are one up
on yourself here . . .
insight, m'friend
xxoo

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2003-08-24 10:05 AM

Not fooling me -- I see that you have very clear eyes, and that the real redemption was in pouring two fingers of insightful writing for the rest of us to drink....

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______________Ratleader______________

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-08-24 10:34 AM

SUch insight in your words I see.You truly are a talented poet my friend

Crystal

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-08-24 10:35 AM

Swift
concise
well done

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-08-24 11:27 PM

Jason youre brilliant..one of the sites best so of course i knew to look to the last few pages and smallest number of replies to find you..I know its not about replies but i wish you'd get the recognition you deserve

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

9 posted 2003-08-25 12:21 PM

Kaora,
Thank you, I think "saving it" is the highest praise one can get on PIP

Michelle,
I know I drive you insane with the self abusive writes

Thank you Janette,
The worst lies we tell, are to ourselves

Sue,
Thank you

want to join me for a double shot of self pity?

Ed,
Thanks for sharing the drink.

Crystal,
Thank you for the compliment and for reading.

Karilea,
Thank you for the kind words and the read.

Raph,
I do appreciate every reply I get, and truly, I have some great people that never miss a write(even my terrible ones)I think my blunt, self abusing style are a turn off for some.
You have supported me since the beginning, and that was some high praise.Thank you.

I love this place, thanks guys.

Jason

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-08-25 02:28 AM

seeing that it is free , of course
*smile*

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

11 posted 2003-08-25 03:44 AM

Well, no matter how much you try, some things just won't be drowned out!! What a great message this carries......~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2003-08-25 09:13 AM

Jason - true sometimes is better...

BC

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