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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-08-23 06:18 PM




The trees stand tall like sentinels
As they salute the morning sun
There's so many signs from nature
That new life has just begun

You can almost hear a pin drop
Upon the forest floor
Here I am at one with nature
With so much yet to explore

The sun shines out across the valley
On this early Summer's morn
I breathe in the cool clean air
And I feel like I'm reborn

The birds call to each other
Through the treetops way up high
As they go about their business
Before they take to the sky

I close my eyes and imagine
That I'm lying here with you
As I try with all my might
To dream you into view

* * *

"If I never would have met him,
I would have dreamed him into being."

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
eminor_angel
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since 2003-05-22
Posts 323
Canada
1 posted 2003-08-23 06:20 PM


"As I try with all my might
To dream you into view"

good write.

Kielo
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since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109

2 posted 2003-08-24 08:44 PM


I'm in awe. Your descriptions are majestic, and the ending is so powerful. I know the feeling.

Kielo

I'll never forget you, even though I'm moving on....

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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3 posted 2003-08-24 11:23 PM


I close my eyes and imagine
That I'm lying here with you
As I try with all my might
To dream you into view

Sue...this is so lovely.  Holding these words in my heart tonight for someone once I knew.

A beautiful write...
Patricia


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4 posted 2003-08-25 01:38 PM


Sue:  This is a beautiful world you are describing and of course, you need someone to share it with, even if you have to dream.
I know you really do have someone!

Betty Lou Hebert

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