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lucky
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0 posted 2003-08-23 02:27 PM



turned on
the radio wife shot in
head man does the same
both are dead of course the
system sheds a tear for the
lose of a meal judge was

depressed lost a
jaded deal
turned
on the
tele see
what was said
there's war in the east

some more are dead turned on
the guide that ran a clip check out
this upcoming event said what are
you waiting for broken plate on a
kitchen floor I guess I missed
it daughter has pms and
is leaving home
crying in
bath
thinks
she's alone
I've gone to the barn

to get away but the animals
say  “what’s up”  where ‘s my
morning meal I sneak up the
hill for some quiet rest I
talk to God as we
wander the
crest


[This message has been edited by lucky (08-23-2003 02:31 PM).]

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Edder
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1 posted 2003-08-23 02:43 PM


this speaks to me of life and the short reprieves it takes to keep us sane. well done
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2 posted 2003-08-23 03:15 PM


Woah...
SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-08-23 03:23 PM


WOW...those priceless times we have a few minutes alone just to talk with God, and clear our head of all the things that sap us of our strength. I liked this so much!!! Great reading!!

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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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4 posted 2003-08-23 10:08 PM


Man-oh-man, my dyslexia still hates these, but the rest of me likes 'em so much I have to read 'em anyway! Nicely done, luckyfella.....

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5 posted 2003-08-23 10:13 PM


Lucky/Dale...you're a real special guy, you know?  
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