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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-08-23 12:59 PM





Pounding drum of waves.

Crescendoing thoughts of you.

Heart beats synchronized.

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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-08-23 01:43 PM


Bootiful.

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2 posted 2003-08-23 05:39 PM


MidnightSun~

And also A Loverly senryu~

Beautiful !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Duncan
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3 posted 2003-08-23 06:11 PM


Hope neither of you misses a beat!!  
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4 posted 2003-08-23 06:22 PM


Ohhhhhhh ... I do like your cadence, such a sense of harmonic completion.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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