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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-08-23 09:19 AM


What words have fallen
Into the deep empty well of darkness,
Are you so craven
You have crawled into it’s pit in shyness,
Hear the black raven
Scolding you for lacking any boldness.
Stand up to the word
Have their dull thoughts taken over your own
What have you then heard
That drives you from your comfortable home,
What evil’s calling
That makes your little soul fall to starkness
Are knives now their word
That flays your skin leaving only bare bone
What have you now heard
As you leap into the well of darkness.

Gloom


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-08-23 12:21 PM


quote:
Hear the black raven
Scolding you for lacking any boldness

Gloom, have you been hanging around outside my window lately? LOL, there are several who have screeched at me recently. I screech back sometimes, yanno, then ponder the intent of these complaints.

Kielo
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since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109

2 posted 2003-08-24 08:38 PM


*shaking head* Wow. I'm amazed. This is awesome, and I mean that in the most reverent sense of the word. I'm so glad I didn't miss this.

Kielo

I'll never forget you, even though I'm moving on....

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