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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-08-23 08:57 AM

A Night Like This

Into a starry night like this
In unintended swells of fire
I soared the rim of spirit’s bliss

A pure and fragile synthesis
Two tender hearts in youth retired
Into a starry night like this

In undertows of lingering kiss
With heart unveiled of its attire
I soared the rim of spirit’s bliss

Into love’s strange and deep abyss
Where spawn the seeds of life’s desire
Into a starry night like this

Life suddenly erased the myths
As to itself it now aspired
And soared the rim of spirit’s bliss

In silent joy I reminisce
Of vibrant love that years expire
Into a starry night like this
I soared the rim of spirit’s bliss

Elizabeth Santos

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-08-23 08:59 AM

You ARE a poem...
this is lovely, Lady Santos...
very, very lovely...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-08-23 09:07 AM

Elizabeth
Yes you are a poem.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2003-08-23 09:32 AM

In silent joy I reminisce
Of vibrant love that years expire
Into a starry night like this
I soared the rim of spirit’s bliss

I am scooping up your verses this morning, Elizabeth. So many lovely poems...so many lovely reads...Beautiful works of art...each a joy to savor!

Patricia

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-08-23 12:29 PM

LovelyLizzyLady~
Total word-rapture~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-08-24 10:44 PM

In undertows of lingering kiss
With heart unveiled of its attire
I soared the rim of spirit’s bliss

Such a pretty sight to see and feel...

Love your work Elizabeth~
My apologies for not telling you so more often.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2003-08-25 12:04 PM

Beautiful!

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2003-08-25 06:26 PM

You're soaring for sure, blissfully so...

...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-08-25 07:17 PM

nice

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 2003-08-25 07:57 PM

And how you do soar my dear friend

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-08-25 08:45 PM

Elizabeth . . .

God Bless You for writing a villanelle!
This is lovely
xxoo

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2003-08-26 03:27 AM

Liz...this is absolutely beautiful, my friend. It sings...

Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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