La façon que nous aimons (the way we love)

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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-23 04:42 AM

We had no sky, at times,

*nous avons taché nos mains avec le vin.

Danced along with the wind,

*nous sommes lavé les mains avec le clair de lune rouge.

Letting lingering memories finally rest,

*Faire vous vous souvenez de la façon nous avons dansé, oh l'amour, de peur que nous oublions.

Watching from the outside, in on us, the moon..

*Mes yeux ne laisseront jamais vont.

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Translation

* We stained our hands with wine.
* We washed our hands with the red moonlight.
* Do you remember the way we danced, oh love, lest we forget..
* My eyes will never let go..

[This message has been edited by Kaoru (08-23-2003 04:49 AM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-08-23 06:27 AM

This is beautiful, Meghan. I see two poets intermingling cultures and thoughts, so that no matter what language, the poetry streams on...

I enjoyed this very much!

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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2 posted 2003-08-23 07:34 AM

beautifully romantic and moony
love both translations

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-08-23 09:46 AM

As you have so wonderfully illustrated--love is beautiful in any language!

EA

IndigoEve
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Etched in the illusion of time

4 posted 2003-08-23 12:11 PM

this is so beautiful..even more so because it's written in french, my all time favorite language. into mi biblioteca this one will go.

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

Marge Tindal

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5 posted 2003-08-23 12:20 PM

Meghan~
This is elegant word-tapestry,
rich in the vibrant colors of your dual presentation~

*sighs*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Kielo
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6 posted 2003-08-23 02:00 PM

*shaking head* Wow. That is impressive. You always use your words well, and beautifully, and the mingling of French and English only adds to it....

Kielo

wounded and broken and hurting.... what scares me is that I'm starting to just not care, except that I wish I could cry the pain away....

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

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7 posted 2003-08-23 06:16 PM

I love every line.. especially the last one.

Thanks for the translations.

beautifully romantic.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Aenimal
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8 posted 2003-08-24 11:36 PM

elegant, nice touch

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-08-25 01:33 AM

Love it...and why should you let go? James

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29

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Ohio, USA

10 posted 2003-08-25 07:57 AM

I like your mix between French and English. Great poem!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

minoune
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since 2003-08-10

Posts 87
Canada

11 posted 2003-08-25 09:11 AM

the memories of love never leave us...
what we felt stays in our hearts..
and the words we'll always say....
*je me souviens*.... I remember.....

minoune

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