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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-08-22 10:55 PM



eyes, ears, mouths,
magnified,personified
multiple births,
vacant mixed up faces
mustache,beards,and lashes
silly putty, paint by number,
pull apart, mix em up,
jumbled,scrambled
blink,blink,
they follow still,
stacked up high,
totempoles,
watching mercilessly,
stinging with karma,
on this crooked path i choose

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-23-2003 06:41 PM).]

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-08-22 11:31 PM


Dear girlielocks, you are an amazing woman!
Let em hear you roar!  

This reminds me of those 'things'..what were they called??  (help me here)     Where you used the magnet pencil to move that stuff around the face, making beards and eye lashes, sideburns and such.  Remember those things???  Or am I dating myself???

Anyway, I love reading your poetry...and everything you write.
You've got a special kind of flair Michele!!!

Kaoru
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2 posted 2003-08-22 11:31 PM


Mmhmm, great .. enough said.
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-08-22 11:35 PM


lori,
i age with you!!!
i was thinking of that too,
couldnt remember
mr. potato  head/ etch a sketch/
the magnet that makes beards and stuff on the faces, i must find that name now

thank you too kauro

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-08-23 12:26 PM


oh my another master piece of penning,,,,

pick up sticks an a box of cracker jacks,,,

     


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-08-23 01:17 AM


You must not have wanted a boring life!--so your blueprint had a bit of everything ~ every witch way!-I mean, "which" way!


EA

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-08-23 01:23 AM


Loved this, Michele....you are
full of talent, Lady!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

bklynboy
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7 posted 2003-08-23 06:07 PM


Very good Michele...I think you captured it all
Janette
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8 posted 2003-08-23 06:46 PM


"on this crooked path i choose"

But then to just go straight would be ohhhh sooooooooo boring ... yes?

"crooked" becomes you well.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
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New York
9 posted 2003-08-24 09:05 AM


Michele,
they pile up quickly, yes?

Sigh . . . I know
*smile*
xxoo

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-08-24 09:13 AM


Michele,
It is Kama, enjoyed.

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