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screaming life, quietly dying (people watching)
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screaming life, quietly dying (people watching) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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screaming life in the heart of once assured in the arrogance of youth that it would always before the flight before the fall where things better left unsaid were not in his rage the want to destroy something beautiful so he destroys himself he lays cindered staring into the sun quietly dying *inspired by serenity's challenge, the title of a photo essay screaming life by charles peterson,the name of a fellow pip poet i added everything in between [This message has been edited by Aenimal (08-22-2003 10:48 PM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
in his rage the want to destroy something beautiful so he destroys himself Very cool write Raph, very, very cool. Jason |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Fascinating ! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I see... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Who is he? |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Amazing.. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Excellent! fate is not just |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
You certainly took the challenge in an interesting direction...  I love it.  Kielo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are a trailblazer! You always put your own unique spin on everything! Intriguing write!   EA |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Damn good. The want to destroy something beautiful...That reminded me of a part in the movie Fight Club, one of my favorite movies. Yeh, anyways. Really really liked this. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I feel this every night, somewhere inside me, in a tiny part of me that's always there, floating around |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Challenge met well above Raph . . . quietly dying . . . you know that would be an awesome band name too Do you have a link to the art? assured in the arrogance of youth God what a farce . . . youth . . . a preceptor to real life, that's why it is so much fun . . . I know I have watched this person many times *smile* xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-23-2003 10:18 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thoughts of Icarus... thank you. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks again everybody for the replies and read |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Great poem. I wonder what happened to Jen anyways? I had fun argueing with her  inspirations are interesting sometimes  insanity is not a crime |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You didn't just watch, you looked right inside..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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