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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-08-22 09:09 PM


“DANCING IN MOONLIGHT”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Dreams of the ages have I
searched in destinies
lonely paths,
eternity has passed by
on a soft breeze
yet to be found, but tonight
I see your eyes dancing in
moonlight, as my fingers
trace delicate patterns
upon your skin…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-08-22 09:13 PM


Oooh myyyyy Bill...
How very very soft and sensual this is...
Warm nights under the moon....mmmm.
~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-08-22 10:24 PM


nice thoughts expressed,,,,

     


inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-08-22 11:08 PM


always the moonlight
above or beneath me
in the shadows,its glow

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2003-08-22 11:34 PM


This is beautiful..
Patricia
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5 posted 2003-08-23 12:13 PM


Ahhh...Bill, what a lovely final read for the evening.  Now it's time to close my eyes and dream.

Good night, my friend.

Patricia

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6 posted 2003-08-23 01:31 AM


Do you enjoy being tenderly tickled back?


EA

Sunnyone
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7 posted 2003-08-23 03:39 AM


Ah, BC.........the romantic King of the Gypsies has struck again, and with the tenderness that we have come to expect from you!!!  Great one......~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

JilGirl
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8 posted 2003-08-23 04:26 AM


Delightfully tender and
romantic! A very fine write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Nan
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9 posted 2003-08-23 08:59 AM


... There ya go again, BCI ...

Ivy Rose
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10 posted 2003-08-23 04:37 PM


Bill...As always, your poem sets the standard for romantic poems. It's amazing how much you've said here in these few brief lines. Loved this poem, Bill. ***Ivy Rose
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11 posted 2003-08-23 04:46 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you always seem to captivate the moonlight and absorb it into your acoustic! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Ariana
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12 posted 2003-08-23 07:09 PM


BC
Is there a bottle of champagne and scented candles???????  Maybe strawberries dipped in chocolate?    Hmmmmmmmmmmm??

Bonnie j
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13 posted 2003-08-23 07:43 PM


This sounds so tranquil and romantic.
Ahhh.....
Bon-Bon

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