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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-22 04:10 PM



Combustion

when you see fire
does it make you tremble
do you feel the match
burnt struck power
in the glow
of the sweetest heat
dancing in the flame
walking the trial of
desires heated light
a torch shamelessly fueled
drawn to where you
are passionately invited

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
icebox
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1 posted 2003-08-22 06:28 PM


Well, there is fire...and then there is fire...

*smile*

I will post a poem for you, later.

Wind
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2 posted 2003-08-22 07:36 PM


I always prefered ice over fire. though you do write it very well agh..I feel this

insanity is not a crime

bklynboy
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florida
3 posted 2003-08-23 05:58 PM


Hmmm....I love to play with fire
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4 posted 2003-08-23 09:58 PM


When I see fire, I see destination. Any kind of fire, any kind of destination.

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inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-08-23 10:03 PM


it is mesmerizing, i know
something just draws us into its intensity, and passion

Honeybee
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6 posted 2003-08-23 10:07 PM


Damn Helen! Strut your poet self, girl!   
I LOVE the way you write!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
7 posted 2003-08-23 10:09 PM


..sigh
Aenimal
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8 posted 2003-08-24 11:35 PM


sigh..yeah i know meg took it but its my sigh..grin
PassionandFun
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9 posted 2003-08-25 12:20 PM


Passion can be incredible when the right fires are burning and with someone who knows how to keep them lit.  Thanks for the nice thoughts...
Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
10 posted 2003-08-25 12:32 PM


Like a moth, Drawn to both your picture, and your poetry.Beautiful!

Jason

Nan
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11 posted 2003-08-26 07:48 AM


Hot stuff, Lady H...
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12 posted 2003-08-26 12:31 PM


Echoing Ice!

Great write Lady

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