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angelblueyes
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0 posted 2003-08-22 12:46 PM


From the deep recesses of my soul
There is a voice that is not told
For it lurks there waiting in the night
Waiting for the chance to take it's flight
The darkness that surrounds me
Like a prison that won't set me free
My dreams become filled with pain
My pillow with tears is now fully stained
As dawn approaches something says no
And of this darkness I just let go
Waking in a ragged breath
Thankful that there is no death
In the morning I realize this
One more time death has missed
And so each night, I will forever fight
For I know I'm not ready to take that flight

Crystal

© Copyright 2003 Crystal - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-08-22 12:52 PM


Crystal - again, a never - ending fight indeed

And so each night, I will forever fight
For I know I'm not ready to take that flight
I wish I had your attitude
xxoo

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-08-22 01:04 PM


"As dawn approaches something says no
And of this darkness I just let go"

~ Yes, "just let it go"--and hopefully it will not return to haunt your nights...


Linda

angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-08-22 01:25 PM


littlewing: Yes it is, but it is a fight that is worth fighting for

Linda:Thank you so much.Through my writes like this is how I release it and it may come back, but then I write some more and away it goes

Crystal

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-08-22 02:56 PM


Great words of comfort and wisdom.
Eric

angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-08-22 02:58 PM


Eric:Thank you.Between my writes and all my wonderful family at Passion's I have a soul filled with inspiration, comfort, and love :suqeeze:

Crystal

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6 posted 2003-08-22 03:33 PM


Excellent and terrific penning,,

     


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7 posted 2003-08-22 04:01 PM


Crystal~
Be sure and add a *huglet*~
~*Marge*~

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Patricia
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8 posted 2003-08-22 06:23 PM


Crystal...now I was just thinking about this early this morning before the noise of life got in the way.  You penned my thoughts, dear lady.

A wonderful write, my friend.

Patricia

icebox
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9 posted 2003-08-22 06:26 PM


There is no need to fear the darkness.

Wonderful poetry; try reading it to the shadows.

angelblueyes
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10 posted 2003-08-24 10:15 AM


Marge:Thank you

Patricia:Thank you very much my friend:squezze:

icebox:Thanks.I will try that

Crystal

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