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Tears |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US 
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You take my heart and rip it out leave tears streaming down my face again My heart is broken just like always even though you swore you never could do I've learned to trust not a soul on this earth my future looks bleak but I'm too hurt to care What really kills me is one burning question are you even aware and do you even notice tears Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I feel your sadness and despair in this.I hope whoever this is can learn to shine and trust again.For it shows a beautiful heart and a wondrous spirit that the world needs to see  Crystal |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahh Kristie, you know they are aware - for some odd reason they dont see it as we do all the time or they hide it. Beautiful writing xxoo |
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