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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-08-22 08:13 AM


Giving rise to unanimous perceptions
Particles of kindred happenstance together
Distinctly embryonic, transcending outside and in
Nature’s cosmic mind, connecting rise of spirit

Baptizing imaginations, made into flesh
In earthly places unknown to the unspiritual
Where reality causes everything to be mixed
With constitutional and positive structural means
A most definite point in time, igniting dreams

Movements become presented for absolute discussion
Generating intimacy, within unconditioned realism
Turning water into wine, sentiments of moral truths
Conceiving positive features, an entity with charm…human

Therein shaping passions, active ongoing manuscripts
Where ever we meet infinity’s pervasive spirit
Hailed and professing in our lively modes of thought
Where grains of sand breathe a phenomenal voyage

There veils a mass of spontaneous pulse, owning impression
Articulating deliberate images, that is so totally present
Within every fiber of space and time mapping inter-relations
Extending in areas incomprehensible, maintaining dimensional connections

Life is a Miracle…the human heart & mind, a very powerful thing
Yet…can be as fragile as a butterfly’s wing…..
Simultaneous mutual elasticity, of two mutual partners combined
Timelessly connected to the elements, composing intricate split second designs

Free acts contribute to all comic shapes, a pertinent and significant time series
Where any event would have to say “we are one” consecutive vibration
By the light of some relatable and significant cause,
With which destiny already knows and surrounds

Immeasurable contribution of imageries, which cross our paths
Dynamic yet opaque, a picturesque abstract
This life form which out to be flesh


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MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2003-08-22 09:05 AM


Profoundly contemplative, encouraging active association and understanding -- A.P. Philosophy analyzing the metaphysical premise of the relevance of a life in this realm of existance.  You have quite the admirable mind and thought process, LeeJ.

-MVS

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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-08-22 09:12 AM


LeeJ
I can only second Mark. With this as my favorite passage.

Life is a Miracle…the human heart & mind, a very powerful thing
Yet…can be as fragile as a butterfly’s wing…..
Simultaneous mutual elasticity, of two mutual partners combined
Timelessly connected to the elements, composing intricate split second designs


Kaoru
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3 posted 2003-08-22 11:41 PM


Profound, indeed.. Lee..


QjQ
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4 posted 2003-08-23 12:09 PM


gee lee you amaze me each time i see your penning,,,

     


Sunnyone
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5 posted 2003-08-24 03:56 AM


I thoroughly enjoy reading your work, as it always gives me something to stretch my mind, and new inspirations!!!  Great job here, Lee, and am looking for more now!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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