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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-08-22 07:22 AM


Clouds drift across the sky caught by mountains reaching high
White congregations gray and darken more as they stay,
Snared in place they then cry making for a rainy day.

Gloom


© Copyright 2003 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2003-08-22 08:09 AM


Hi Prof, and just wanted to tell you that you hit upon one of my favorite hobbies here...watching the clouds.  This poem made me realize I hadn't done that in a while, so thank you!!!  Quite enjoyed the read, too! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-08-22 09:31 AM


We layed outside last night on the trampoline watching the clouds and stars. You've written well here
Crystal

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-08-22 09:34 AM


awesome...
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
4 posted 2003-08-22 10:27 AM


hmm..rainy days...

Very nicely done!

Susan

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