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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
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on the moon

0 posted 2003-08-22 04:49 AM


On these stormy nights
where the thunder and lightining roar
I wish I had someone here to hold me
make my fear no more
Rain pours down the windows
as I try to look out and see
try to see if your out there
waiting for me
I want to see you standing there
soaking wet,with a huge smile on your face
id let you in dry you off...
and the rest is history

[This message has been edited by Black Swan (08-22-2003 04:52 AM).]

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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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1 posted 2003-08-22 08:46 AM


Oh yum!  Now that would be nice!  You just keep watching, it'll happen!  ~K~
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-08-22 09:03 AM


It's quite the atmosphere that you have created here!


EA

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
3 posted 2003-08-22 12:02 PM


Talia . . . me too
Dont stay away so long next time, k?
nice write
xxoo

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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Oklahoma
4 posted 2003-08-22 12:03 PM


He'd be crazy not to be there Your emotions were strong and clear here.
Crystal

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Georgia
5 posted 2003-08-22 12:36 PM


I really liked this one!
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