navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » I Didn't Care
Open Poetry #28
Post A Reply Post New Topic I Didn't Care Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Black Swan
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-08-21 11:10 PM


I didn't care...
just wanted to walk along
the side of  scenic road
wanted to hold your hand...
sit, and watch the sunlight
glitter through the trees
talk about nothing,everything
anything
I didnt't care...
I was with you
on a beautiful day
I don't think you realize
how much I appreciated you
just having you there...
listening to me ramble
the fact that you stayed
and walked
and noticed
I didn't care...
when you left me
just the fact that I had that day
my memory

© Copyright 2003 Talia - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2003-08-22 02:05 AM


This felt real and I admire that.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2003-08-22 06:25 PM


Talia~

'talk about nothing, everything
anything'


Oh yes ... I've lived this moment-of-gentle-remember~

WONDERFULLY PENNED~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-08-22 08:39 PM


I love it when that happens.  What a special memory.  ~K~
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2003-08-22 09:07 PM


was with you
on a beautiful day
I don't think you realize
how much I appreciated you
just having you there...
listening to me ramble

i love it,
when they can listen to the dribble,
and not run away

Ceinwyn
Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
5 posted 2003-08-22 09:13 PM


it'd be nice to finally find someone who would listen to me ramble..maybe next time it'd be more than a memory?? *sigh* wonder if it exists anyways??

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » I Didn't Care

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary