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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-08-21 08:10 PM



She leads a lonely life
Trying to find love
When there is no love in her heart
Sitting at the bar
Talking the game with another
Knowing he isn't the one
Wondering if that's even possible
So she'll take him home
And try to fit her mold to him
Make him the One for right now
Leaving the worries of loneliness
Forgetting the love she needs
Was left in a home miles away

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

© Copyright 2003 Bradly Stott - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-08-21 08:12 PM


Oh Jesus . . .

ok this stung . . .
xxoo

gringakiwi
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2 posted 2003-08-21 08:18 PM


This was a great rendering of love lost *sigh*
great write.

angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-08-21 09:24 PM


Oh wow!! This one hit close.I can say once you find the love for yourself it's amazing at the beauty and wondrous things that you can acheieve.
Crystal

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