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gringakiwi
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since 2003-08-05
Posts 189


0 posted 2003-08-21 07:57 PM


A chain
silver
heart locket
worn with love
for so many nights
cradling my neck
reminding me of love's truth
until
he left
with Laura
and the chain
that I loved
found a watery grave
at midnight
under my tears
at the bottom
of the
sea.

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-08-21 08:04 PM


Oh Jesus Connie . . .
this is an awesome write
the content, I am sorry
but one brilliant perfect write
well met indeed
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
2 posted 2003-08-21 08:23 PM


You know...the ex's wedding ring is somewhere in the NY sewage system...

Very good write and great pic!

Susan

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
3 posted 2003-08-21 09:18 PM


Exceptionally written and well met.
Crystal

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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2003-08-21 09:44 PM


Beautiful..but very sad. Well met, love.
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