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Open Poetry #28

Splitting Airs

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-08-21 06:24 PM

The air that we breathe
is cold in stride

hot with humility

and lacking pride

And I take it, in
trying to ease

you only exhale

wanting please

Before what is left
draws on its last ...

decisions be made,

splitting the past

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-08-21 10:01 PM

okay,
im going to be nice now................

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-08-21 10:13 PM

Great write, dont mind Michelle, she hates self-abuse.

Jason

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-08-21 10:15 PM

Very good write.
Crystal

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-08-21 10:23 PM

just keep dancing

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2003-08-21 11:50 PM

I enjoy your style of writing.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-08-22 12:12 PM

Beautiful.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-08-22 11:06 AM

And I take it, in
trying to ease

you only exhale

wanting please

I'm going to think on that one,
and read all kinds of things into it!

Nicely penned Craig

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-08-22 11:15 AM

Well done....it doesn't take a lot of words to reach the deepest places, if they're the right ones.

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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2003-08-22 12:17 PM

waiting to exhale''

ME~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

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