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El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
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0 posted 2003-08-26 09:00 AM


I remember when we were kids—
It doesn’t seem too long ago—
We had good times together,
A good friendship began to grow!

I remember running with you,
And all the laughs and smiles we shared—
None of the times by myself
To the moments with you compared…

But yet, if I had a choice
I know I could not go back,
Because I’ve learned so many things,
Where before I was in lack.

So today I look back with smiles,
And thank you for the times we had,
Then look forward to the future
With a heart prepared and glad;

And each moment, given by God,
With all of my life I will seize,
And after the moment is through
I’ll thank you for the memories.

© Copyright 2003 Benjamin Graber - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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1 posted 2003-08-26 09:34 AM


Very sweet...

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

minoune
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since 2003-08-10
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2 posted 2003-08-26 09:35 AM


absdolutely beautifully written and whoever your friend is.. is very lucky indeed... Your truelly a wonderful one...

minoune :0)

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-08-26 11:21 AM


Benjamin~

'None of the times by myself
To the moments with you compared'


Indeed, you have touched a special remember within my heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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4 posted 2003-08-26 05:34 PM


Ben,  this is beautiful
you keep such a positive attitude . . .
this would be hard for me to let go of
even though I know . . . the last stanza is lovely  

But yet, if I had a choice
I know I could not go back,
Because I’ve learned so many things,

so very true, m'friend
xxoo

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA
5 posted 2003-08-27 08:38 AM


SharaRose,

I glad you enjoyed it.

minoune,

This was actually written for more than one friend... There are so many people I have shared pleasent memories with. And I'm realizing that we're not kids anymore!

Marge,

Thanks... I'm glad this was a blessing to you.

Sue,

Thank you for the compliment I write sad poems sometimes, but even those I tend to end with a positive note. I guess I try to see the good out of life,even when I'm discouraged.

~Ben

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