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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-21 05:42 PM



Tumble

tonight I think I will
go to the laundry mat
instead of thinking about
touching, the feel that
stretches you and folds
I will watch the water fill
and clothes go round instead
of the thoughts I have here
a different kind of tumble
dry eyed and pressing heart

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Edder
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since 2003-04-02
Posts 671

1 posted 2003-08-21 06:11 PM


Helen...hoping the tumble washes away your burdens

[This message has been edited by Edder (08-21-2003 06:12 PM).]

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2003-08-21 06:30 PM


Wow ...


      lost in the warmth of your tumble!


                Hope the timer is a bit off.  lol
                       (in your favor of course)

alisa
Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70
Florida
3 posted 2003-08-21 06:44 PM


great, wonderful....

the same as you....

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