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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-08-21 12:58 PM



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~~*~~
It was a mystical feeling
as she looked into the skies
She could see the dream she had awakened from
clearly unfolding before her eyes

Every scene in her dream
was appearing just as she had seen
With little fairies and leprechauns
in a world where she was queen

In this land she saw so clearly
she felt like Alice in Wonderland
Or the fairy Godmother of Cinderella
with the magic wand in her hand

Who by waving her magical wand
could make her magic appear
of the gown, the slippers, the dance
and the prince who was so sincere

Now she is realizing
as upon these scenes she sees
She could make dreams happen
and make real her fantasies

In a land where all are happy
and all dreams can become true
For hers have unfolded before her eyes
for her to see clearly in plain view
~~*~~


revisited and slightly revised



[This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-22-2003 11:06 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-08-21 01:14 PM


Enchantingly beautiful Ethel!
Loved the fantasy feel to this...much enjoyed!
~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2003-08-21 02:16 PM


Who by waving her magic wand
could make her magic appear
of the gown, the slippers, the dance
and the prince who was so sincere

In a perfect world!!!  

So beautiful, your dreams.  Hugs Ethel~



kaleanna
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3 posted 2003-08-21 02:40 PM


what a lovely poem


Meesh

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4 posted 2003-08-21 03:09 PM


Home! How I long to return! lol

Enchanting, Dear Ethel!


Linda

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5 posted 2003-08-21 05:50 PM


Ah, mystical fairyland of dreams. Beautiful Ethel.

Huggles, Marti

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-08-21 06:56 PM


Ethel,  
this reminded me exactly what you do
and how you see
*smile*
xxoo

Corinne
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7 posted 2003-08-21 07:04 PM


Magical and lovely!!!


Core

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8 posted 2003-08-21 09:45 PM


I absolutlely love this.Magical, beautiful, and smooth.
Crystal

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9 posted 2003-08-21 10:32 PM


Beyond beautiful! Both the words and the picture! I love this!  

Sauni The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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10 posted 2003-08-21 11:37 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Ethel, I know how beautiful these dreams are, sweet friend, when I was a little boy I used to have nightmares every night and I never wanted those dreams to come true, and now I have happy dreams of my dream girl and unicorns and faeries and I want so much for them to come true! (kiss on cheek) May sweet dreams of Gary and children and innocence always fill your heart, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-08-22 11:13 AM


Nancy,  
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Lori
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Kaleanna   :heart;
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Thanks to all of you. Your
replies are much appreciated.
Hugs  
Ethel

garysgirl
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12 posted 2003-08-22 11:15 AM


Linda  
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Marti  
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Sue  
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I thank ya'll, and appreciate
each of you very much.  
Hugs to each of you  
Ethel

garysgirl
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13 posted 2003-08-22 11:16 AM


Core  
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Crystal  
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Saunni  
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Noah  
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Thanks to all of you.
I appreciate ya'll.
Hugs  
Ethel

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