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Open Poetry #28
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ptwils165
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0 posted 2003-08-21 12:46 PM


a lonely heart slouched under sycamore,
throws thorns to a fireball sky
watching pale leaves attempt back-flips at dusk,
he pleads to the moon ‘when?’ and ‘why?’
the moonlight explodes in ‘I love you’,
a firework- shot from the gun-,
lost in the twilight, he cries out her name
and prays to the evening sun.

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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-08-21 01:08 PM

Beautiful write...fantastic imagery!
Very much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~
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