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kaleanna
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since 2003-08-18
Posts 89
TX, USA

0 posted 2003-08-21 12:39 PM


I am new to the forums and thought i would post one of my poems.
Meesh

A touch never felt

There i stand, waiting to feel
a touch, a kiss
a caress from your hand

waiting to hear, a compliment
an i love you or some sweet words

waiting to feel you wrap your arms
around me in a loving embrace
a hug, to be held in your arms

but here i still stand
waiting
for a touch that never comes

A touch never felt
words that have not been spoken
in awhile

Needing to feel your arms around me
needing that loving embrace
the words to be spoken that i long to hear

But as i feel nothing but the cold wind
no gentle caress from your hand
no sweet words or compliment from your mouth

Will that touch come
will i hear those sweet word
i now know, that im standing here
waiting
for a touch from you
that i may never feel again

A touch from you that i long to feel
but might never feel again.
(written july 1, 2003 by MLR)



© Copyright 2003 M. Robin - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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1 posted 2003-08-21 01:09 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very much enjoyed your entrance post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-08-21 01:31 PM


Welcome to Passions!  A lovely first poem, and I am looking forward to more.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-08-21 01:37 PM


Yes, welcome to Passions.

Much enjoyed your thoughts kaleanna~

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
4 posted 2003-08-21 01:52 PM


Welcome!!!

You will feel a loving touch here!

Enjoyed.

Susan

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just out of reach
5 posted 2003-08-21 02:04 PM




Enjoyed your first post!
Welcome to the family.
Have fun here!!
Chris

kaleanna
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since 2003-08-18
Posts 89
TX, USA
6 posted 2003-08-21 02:20 PM


i just wanted to say thank you all for the wonderful welcome


Meesh

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