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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
In the quiet darkness of being alone, No burning candlelight or hearth fire, Just the cold smoothness from the floor of stone, That chills my feet and darkens the desire. The night mostly has passed taking it’s dreams And the bright orb stays below the mountains Yet the moonlight highlights the fine dew sheen Waits to glisten at the sun’s rising curtain A bit of wine remains from last night’s drink, I take the near empty bottle outside, The twilight shows the day is on the brink Then the sunshine to the night sky does ride. Straight from the bottle I toast the new day, With none to talk to and nothing to say. Gloom |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
:'( So sad. Lot's of images come to mind, but lonely seems to jump from the page.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Gloomy~ You know why I like your poetry so much? Because it always makes me want to hold you and comfort you...this one in particular made me want to toast the new day with you... You are good... Susan |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, SharaRose, Pleased you liked it, Seems lonely is one of my better things I do, Perhaps it’s my own fault or it just is my destiny. Thank you, Susan, Your enjoyment gives me pleasure, If I even travel your way, I might take you up on that hold and comfort, and shared toast, But till then I remain Gloom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Perfect gloom, enjoyed |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Seymour, Glad you liked it Gloom |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Straight from the bottle I toast the new day, With none to talk to and nothing to say. perfect. good to read you gloom. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, gemjop Nice to be read, even nicer when the reader enjoys Gloom |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are never really alone  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Loved this melancholy write Gloom... Be nice for you to share that final sip of port with me as we toasted the sunrise. ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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