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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
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Ireland

0 posted 2003-08-21 03:47 AM



The tide is changing and I can’t swim,

Seeking help,

I optimistically murder a hymn.

From the depths of the slippery sea,

The rising current is snapping and spitting at me.

Feeling tired and weary ,

But eager to live,

I question the waters motive.




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