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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-08-20 08:04 PM



I took a ride back into history today
driving on the many roads we once
took Sunday drives on ~ i see many
changes along my travels

as i cross the old wooden bridge oh
yes it's still here my memories take
me back to a winding ~ lane that we
used to go and watch the rushing
waters of the stream pass by

oh yeah my thoughts are clearing in
my mind now as i see the big old tree
with it's span across the stream then
my heart started racing as i rushed
to see ~

I circle the tree looking for the heart and
our initials that I carved were still visible
then very faintly i can see them after i rub
off the moss that had grown over

like i told you when i carved this heart
and our initials on the north side they
would always be there and secretly
hidden from all by the moss that hides
our secret place

     


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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-08-20 08:07 PM


Beautiful memories!
Very well expressed.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-08-21 12:05 PM


Love the way you share your memories.
Crystal

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-08-21 12:23 PM


QjQ - this is written to say of your most special secret place. Lovely write...

BC

Mystic One
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since 2003-09-14
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4 posted 2004-01-17 01:53 PM


Terrific!!!!
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