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Our Secret Place

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QjQ
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0 posted 08-20-2003 08:04 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for QjQ


I took a ride back into history today
driving on the many roads we once
took Sunday drives on ~ i see many
changes along my travels

as i cross the old wooden bridge oh
yes it's still here my memories take
me back to a winding ~ lane that we
used to go and watch the rushing
waters of the stream pass by

oh yeah my thoughts are clearing in
my mind now as i see the big old tree
with it's span across the stream then
my heart started racing as i rushed
to see ~

I circle the tree looking for the heart and
our initials that I carved were still visible
then very faintly i can see them after i rub
off the moss that had grown over

like i told you when i carved this heart
and our initials on the north side they
would always be there and secretly
hidden from all by the moss that hides
our secret place

     

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Enchantress
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since 08-14-2001
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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 08-20-2003 08:07 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Beautiful memories!
Very well expressed.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

angelblueyes
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since 07-19-2003
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2 posted 08-21-2003 12:05 AM       View Profile for angelblueyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelblueyes

Love the way you share your memories.
Crystal
Bill Charles
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since 07-11-2000
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highways, & byways, for now


3 posted 08-21-2003 12:23 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

QjQ - this is written to say of your most special secret place. Lovely write...

BC
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4 posted 01-17-2004 01:53 PM       View Profile for Mystic One   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystic One

Terrific!!!!
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