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Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada


0 posted 08-20-2003 06:05 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise


Pulsing black hole
unknown vacuum
ceasing existence.
I'm not here
in the blanketed night.
Brain waves function voluntarily.
Yet, on another parallel
the spirit cries for familarity.
Stump,
trapped in the ground.
Roots reaching
inward, outward
fighting the suction.
Finding the way,
Craving the sun,
Requesting to be seen.


© Copyright 2003 Amanda Seymour - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 08-20-2003 10:13 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for QjQ

terrific write,,,

     

angelblueyes
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2 posted 08-20-2003 11:48 PM       View Profile for angelblueyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelblueyes

Wonderfully done
Crystal
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


3 posted 08-21-2003 12:28 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Tequilia_Sunrise - you are seen, when writing words like these. Nice write...

BC
JilGirl
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4 posted 08-21-2003 02:28 AM       View Profile for JilGirl   Email JilGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JilGirl

Unusual subject challenging deepest
thoughts. Cleverly penned!
Enjoyed!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Krawdad
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5 posted 08-21-2003 02:34 AM       View Profile for Krawdad   Email Krawdad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krawdad

Bloom where you grow, it is said.
Tequilia_Sunrise
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6 posted 08-22-2003 01:00 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

Thank you everyone and BC your are a great poet and that means alot comming from you

THANK-YOU

Tequilia

Tequilia_Sunrise
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7 posted 07-05-2004 02:40 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

thankx everyone for your lovely comments
 
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