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Tequilia_Sunrise
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0 posted 2003-08-20 06:00 PM




A woman in love on a starlite night,
dreaming of a man to hold close.
Charishing the warmth that he brings her each night.
the warmth that he has brung her tonight.
A man in need on a starlite night lying outside in the cold.
needle in hand, band on his arm, scars to leave the proof.
A man in the road, he's dead as stone.
A woman cries out in the darkened sky.
A killer on the loose, a drug deal gone bad.
All the woman can do is ask why.


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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-08-20 10:12 PM


gee this is terrific,,,

     


Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2004-07-05 02:41 AM


thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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