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Tequilia_Sunrise
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A woman in love on a starlite night,
dreaming of a man to hold close.
Charishing the warmth that he brings her each night.
the warmth that he has brung her tonight.
A man in need on a starlite night lying outside in the cold.
needle in hand, band on his arm, scars to leave the proof.
A man in the road, he's dead as stone.
A woman cries out in the darkened sky.
A killer on the loose, a drug deal gone bad.
All the woman can do is ask why.

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1 posted 08-20-2003 10:12 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for QjQ

gee this is terrific,,,

     

Tequilia_Sunrise
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thankx everyone for your lovely comments
 
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