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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2003-08-20 03:30 PM


Sunshine,
you warm divine,
words of real intent
till I perspire



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1 posted 2003-08-20 04:10 PM


Ah!  How sweet is this??!!
Not everyday a gal gets a poem dedicated to her!
Now my eyes are really green!
~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Robert Frazier
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2 posted 2003-08-20 04:35 PM


Nancy, You know she deserves it!

as for you...

Roses are red
violets are blue
though your eyes have turned green
they are beautiful still!

Martie
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3 posted 2003-08-20 04:41 PM


Robert....This is going to make her smile!
Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-08-20 04:50 PM


Robert, not sure what I said or did to deserve this, but Martie is right, I am smiling.  Thank you!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-20-2003 04:50 PM).]

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5 posted 2003-08-20 04:53 PM


And..she is SO modest too!
Thank you for my little rhyme in return..
My eyes are naturally green though.
Yes...she does deserve it!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Robert Frazier
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6 posted 2003-08-20 05:14 PM


K, Your kind, thoughtful ways have caught
up to you in a most public affirmation.
For the record, most everyone here has
this trait...but, lately, you have been
particularily encouraging - please accept
my feeble attempt at saying "Thanks!"

Robert

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