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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-08-20 08:05 AM



Hand In Hand, Alone


Words fail me
as I kiss the world this morning
knowing that I am passing through
another phase and the depth of my heart
will be seeking solace.

She will greet me with a smile,
a jaundiced look,
an aged face, giving her ten years or more.
The hug will be hard, no softness
left to her body, only that in spirit.

My eyes wish to see her
in another framework, my fingers
wish to walk hand, in hand of strength...
remembering.

Brown eyes, she has,
the only in our family,
now sunken as we will see in each other
the only thing we share on this day...
fear.

We will lunch together, then she going back
to her list of to do's, all having
to do with appointments,
while I travel on, hiding
behind those curtains
as I struggle alone, in thought,
to raise them high,
to camouflage what is.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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bslicker
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1 posted 2003-08-20 09:00 AM


Hey M
Your never alone, if no-where else, but upon these blue pages that Ron has given us.
Opps there goes the talk again...

Here's a morning hug

(((( M ))))

Bernie




A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (08-20-2003 09:01 AM).]

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-08-20 09:12 AM


Thank you Bernie  
Nothing wrong with a hug in blue.

Well I am off for today...a sister to see, then "things to do" ..I appreciate your kindness, always.

hugs back
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-20-2003 09:18 AM).]

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-08-20 09:17 AM


There is no camouflage when you write! It is frank, honest--and naked! You bare your soul.

P.S. Great oxymoronic title!


EA

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-08-20 11:37 AM


The sadness you must be going through
only wishing her pain could ease
Maureen I feel speechless in times such as these
Hope

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-08-23 10:30 AM


Linda and Hope, thank you for your kind remarks.
Sometimes if you can't be comforted, being the comforter can make it easier.

hugs
M

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