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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2003-08-20 07:53 AM



Even if the heavenly stars are falling
And the silky blue oceans do rise
Even when all around is ensnared by temptations mauling
On you my heart relies

They say that love is blind
To them I waste no precious time
Why does love have to be conveniently defined
Whenever my broad smile ranges from the ridiculous to the sublime

Take my hand, take my heart
We shall nevermore be apart
Let me follow, let me guide
For you I will always be beside

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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
1 posted 2003-08-20 03:51 PM


This is so BEAUTIFUL! Sincerely, Sauni

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-08-20 03:55 PM


Very beautiful and romantic

Cold hands means a warm heart

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