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FACE - OFF
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FACE - OFF |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
The fire in his eyes narrated the story itself. No one would enter into this arena without good cause. James being the rational kind, Thought the slaying of his soul was just that. Though time had indeed elapsed, Some 20 years or so, The undenying hatred of his destroyer, Had barely dimmed, Just like the sun of the prehistoric era. The dark power had ate away at him, Right to the core of his soul, Nothing remained except, The last flicker of humanity. Terrible deeds had been committed, All in the name of his signature. With heartfelt angelic cries in the background, The FACE-OFF was to finally begin. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good write n read |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hey mercury, first off, this is a great poem. although I can't understand it completely, I still think that is has great quality. insanity is not a crime |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Enjoyed the read.Felt the strength in this. Crystal |
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