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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Sometimes I forget who I am, Sometimes I feel like a sacrificial lamb, Sometimes I tend to exaggerate the truth, Like the time I said I slept with Ruth. Sometimes I dare not sleep, Sometimes I get mad and say bleeping bleep bleep, Sometimes I care too much, Heaven is a human touch. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so true! liked this, very short but to the point |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Enjoyed the read! Ah, yes, the human touch CAN seem like Heaven! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A loving human touch is indeed nirvana!   EA |
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Jordyn05 Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 62 |
Wow. This poem made me cry. It is made me feel like I was in Heaven. keep on posting. Jordyn  *hugs* |
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