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Worded Yellow-Brick Road
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Worded Yellow-Brick Road |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Worded Yellow-Brick Road ~*Marge Tindal*~  Where are all the worded yesterdays of the backroads of my mind ? Gathering new rust in the garages of time~ ~*~ Calendar pages flipping backwards bringing recall into rewind Where are the worded yesterdays of another place and time ? ~*~ Yesterday's poetic pages of fragmented time flutter 'round the wind-of-mill falling across the shadowed shoulders of time now standing still~ ~*~ Time standing still in the meadow wearing the rust of Tin-Man's regret Where is the worded yellow-brick road that hasn't beckoned me yet ? *If memory serves me well, and it usually does, this one was inspired by DG after a visit to Vicky's Poetry Place* Photo courtesy of Vicky ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...I can't imagine your words ever rusting...although the photo of Vicky's makes rust look enchanting.  |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Rusty words are the most powerful of all... they carry in memory wisdom yet told. Skipping down the yellow brick road the dust from the rusty words impregnate my soul. Great write! love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely....perfectly lovely Marge. ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Calendar pages flipping backwards bringing recall into rewind" ~ Such an effective visual! A poem worth remembering--  Linda |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Calendar pages flipping backwards bringing recall into rewind Where are the worded yesterdays of another place and time ?" Indeed...I think we've all felt this at one time or another...this touches. A lovely write, Marge. Hugs, ~Vicky P.S. Just to let all of you know...I can't take credit for the photo that Marge found on my website. I found it on one of the 'free photos' sites on the web, and shared it as a 'challenge' photo on my own site. I am very glad that Marge found it, and DG's poem, inspiring. "My friends are my estate." ~Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-19-2003 09:11 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
such beautiful melancholy ~sigh~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Eloquent, just eloquent.  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Marge, Gorgeous scene-great expressions. I like this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Very nostalgic and perfect for the picture! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Nice pic sis, I think the title cound be better... I almost didn't read. Glad I did though... lucky dale |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I like this one a whole-bunch-a-lot ... title and all~  Lucky ... wash your mouth out ~  Thanks everybody ...~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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