I would wonder less, If I knew, yes?

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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-08-19 02:09 PM

I would wonder less, if I knew, yes?

He saw you walking
and I
want to know where
which
clothes you wore
how
long your hair was

When all I want to know, ALL I want to know

Is if you think of me
~ever~

I battle with thoughts that
you MUST

Punching the rememberence
of how

I
always
seemed
to
slip
your
mind

In the end.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2003-08-19 02:30 PM

what comes to mind ...

U N F O R G E T T A B L E

... such as your words.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-08-19 02:42 PM

Gemma, I am so glad that you have the ability to write about all these different emotions that you are going through now. I wish I knew something to say to make you feel better, but I don't. This is something that you are going to have to work out yourself....but just keep talking about it and that will help. Even if it's just talking about these things (that hurt our hearts so bad) in our poetry.
Bless you, child!! I can feel your pain, if that helps any. I have been there before.....

Heart hugs to you

Ethel Mae

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-08-19 02:47 PM

Punching the rememberence
of how

I
always
seemed
to
slip
your
mind

In the end.

only a fool could forget you gem..and he being welsh..well nuff said..grin

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2003-08-20 07:27 PM

enjoy our read

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-08-20 07:31 PM

"I
always
seemed
to
slip
your
mind

In the end."

Amazing...wonderful write...very much enjoyed.
And I do believe you are unforgettable!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

6 posted 2003-08-20 09:36 PM

he is unworthy. tell yourself blue. cause i already have. was sure I replyed, but hey...no one's perfect? I like it a lot

insanity is not a crime

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2003-08-20 10:16 PM

The ending lines...what a punch!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-08-20 11:33 PM

gem, you know . . . thinking too much will drive you insane and not thinking will make you numb. A double edged sword and even if he doesnt show it . . . he thinks of you . . . and an answer to your question
DEFINITELY
xxoo

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

9 posted 2003-08-20 11:36 PM

He is the one who is missing out on one of the most beautiful hearts and souls of a wonderful angel

Crystal

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

10 posted 2003-08-21 08:13 AM

If he isn't thinking of you now, he may later, but then it could be too late.

Enjoyed!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2003-08-21 09:56 AM

When all I want to know, ALL I want to know

Is if you think of me
~ever~

The ending is so powerful... but still, these are the lines that draw me back for another read... so much lies within those few words. *S* Excellent!

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