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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-08-19 12:21 PM



  nakdthoughtisms < 20


In my dreams
I am running
to places I have been,
knowing
that is where
I belong


The sun
shall kiss me today
leaving its trail of heat
for your eyes only


I shall rise
to reach your lips
and then
even you
shall know
the truth


There is a fine line
between what is
and what can be,
some choose not
to crossover


My cup is full
as I drink to lose
and watch as the weight
begins to lift


My eyes stay sealed
this morning
so they can hold on
to yesterday's view


I reach out,
but words
have no arms


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-08-19 12:40 PM


I reach out,
but words
have no arms

no and that is sad, isnt it?
i want real, enough words already give me
life, give me love, give me peace on earth, give me love, give me love,
give me real

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-08-19 01:04 PM


always love your thoughts
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3 posted 2003-08-20 01:51 AM


Now your thoughts were very profound Maureen, and especially the last one, well done indeed.
MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2003-08-21 01:13 AM


VERY cool!  #'s 1,3,6, and 7 all stood out for me.  You've got a fan for your "nakdthoughtisms"!

-MVS

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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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5 posted 2003-08-21 01:25 AM


There is a fine line
between what is
and what can be,
some choose not
to crossover

You are so good at this, and so profound.

Love you Maur~


JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
Posts 364
Washington
6 posted 2003-08-21 01:26 AM


Thoughts appreciated!
Great write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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7 posted 2003-08-23 10:36 AM


Dixie, thank you for being consistent

Michele, sometimes even real isn't all it's cracked up to be...

Sharon, "I reach out,
but words
have no arms"...

never has worked for me.

Mark, you are the master of the less thans.. I am only following your lead when the moment hits me.

Love you too Lori.

Thank you JilGirl.

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