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The (Thoughtless) Pessimist
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The (Thoughtless) Pessimist |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
You're thoughtless Staring into the sun Damning his existence For burning your eyes. You're thoughtless Throwing away a penny Naming it useless For being only copper. You're thoughtless Kissing my crying lips, Pulling back in disgust, Repulsed by the cracks. You're thoughtless Noticing only the heat, Not the wind, nor the reason Why butterflies Exist. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Koko, you astound me with your ability to think and write far beyond your years. For what it may be worth, I am very impressed!  Loving, appreciative hugs, EA |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
 Thank you very much EA. It's worth more than I think you could guess  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Lauren...there you have it... well done! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thank you Karilea!  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
oh my! you ARE amazing lauren. glad to see you writing again...and i DO expect more. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
-Big hugs to Eddles- Thank you very much, Teacher  Hehehe, love you!!I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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