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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-08-19 07:56 AM



I still remember the first kiss you
gave me

that left me feeling like i was in a
soft sensual summer fog

with my heart doing cartwheels over
the moon

and shooting stars flashing by on my
first journey to loving you

did you feel it~?

     


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-08-19 08:00 AM


QjQ
Gosh I hope she did, enjoyed.

gringakiwi
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2 posted 2003-08-19 08:21 AM


I felt it!
Well written, beautifully descriptive.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-08-19 08:40 AM




Yes...very nice Glenn!

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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4 posted 2003-08-19 10:35 AM


if you did...I'm sure she did :-)

good job

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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5 posted 2003-08-19 12:13 PM


Glenn, that was some kiss, huh?
Hey, thanks for your sweet comments about my webpages. I'm glad that you liked it.

Did you notice that you can put your own poems on your free webpages there? Ju7st wondering if you noticed.  
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Ethel

inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-08-19 12:42 PM


if she didnt, then i did
hard to miss the kiss of romance coming from your sweet lips

eor
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7 posted 2003-08-19 12:49 PM


even i felt it, isint the frist kiss wiht someone you know is speical just th best feeling in the world...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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