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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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rippling,sematic tides blue wayward weights crash and glitter reside then back again to consider the motion of the earth natural becomings fates tune humming i hear the sound of my soul its telling me to let everything go... massive,knowledgeable trees shoot up from the ground always seeing never explaining what messsages the earth's sending as the green gently russles glides along oh so mysterious wind my mind somehow stops thinking and my heart glimpses into calm feet connecting with life giving soil and arms stretched out towards the sky above my souls smiles at me and tells me to walk along... my animal sense knows my spiritual third eye sees that everything happens for a reason everything that happens to me you may not know whats going to occur next unpredictable movements and irreplacable loses will always come up all of us questioning its logic leave a moment to the stars,the beach, the woods even ur lovers heart just listen with your soul just know you will never be alone and that none of us ever truly part... [This message has been edited by Black Swan (08-19-2003 05:36 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile. Considering I just canned one of the angriest, nastiest poems I have ever written--I'll just smile SILENTLY, and take this, your words, as confirmation that I did the right thing by letting that go. I'm not yet familiar with your work, and I don't yet know you, but I owe ya one lady. THANK YOU. "you may not know whats going to occur next unpredictable movements and irreplacable loses" shaking my head. tis true, tis true, and I am PROOF.  |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
ppl have said that i have good timing, im glad my work did something postive,then i DO feel like i posted it for a reason, and that in itslef is amazing and backs up what i said hehe....You Are Welcome~  ..its funny my title even has your name in it!thank you for replying...once again glad i could help ~Talia |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Enjoyed this poem..thaught provoking....thank you Goldenrose |
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idonthaveaname Junior Member
since 2003-08-19
Posts 15 |
i really liked this one.. good job, Talia. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Your style has a certain feel that I am enjoying. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Talia, this is one of your most beautiful writes . . . i hear the sound of my soul its telling me to let everything go... yes yes . . . I know and the ending sent this home Beautiful xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Most beautiful Talia...and very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Beautiful and much enjoyed. Crystal |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful writing. Eric |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Talia~ I smiled a knowing smile, just thinking of the possiblities within your title~ This is about as poignant a penning as I'll read this day~ 'my souls smiles at me and tells me to walk along... my animal sense knows my spiritual third eye sees that everything happens for a reason everything that happens to me' Indeed ... yes, indeed~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"i hear the sound of my soul its telling me to let everything go..." Love this. Is this one of your songs yet? If not, you need to consider it. Powerful messages within, I'm keeping it. ~K~ |
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