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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Full of Empty My glass once poured full with hate and refilled apace from a keg of bitterness rests empty on the shelf. For a time I topped it off with a sweet foam I helped create that has since come to evaporate. It waits there now with dry stains and crusts that no one reaches out to touch. Helen, thanks for the inspiration, ©081803 [This message has been edited by Krawdad (08-19-2003 02:20 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh yes, this cuts though the crystal, reflecting what no one can see. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have that same stuff in my glass too |
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idonthaveaname Junior Member
since 2003-08-19
Posts 15 |
"No more for me tonight.. i've had enough, look at what i've become!" |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
hey you...smooooooooooooch...h |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, if you clean that glass up a bit-- with cleansing tears if need be, and fill it to the brim with happy memories from the past, and dreams for your tomorrow, I'll join you in drinking to your health and happiness! Loving, healing hugs, EA |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
KD...very fine write old friend....and EarthAngel...very fine reply... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The flip answer is to say bring it down wash it out, fill it with a new brew... but the honest answer is... I understand. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You once replied to a post of mine with a ..seperated at birth? You,Helen and I one..er..happy? family grin |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
bump...because...I CAN !!! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Blues, Oh, but it was out there for all to see . . . Dixie, If we could only dash them against a hearth, like in an old movie scene, and reach for a new one. idont . . . The haven of the night? I know it well. h, Hey you . . .  EA, Did I forget to mention tear stains? Now if I could just figure out how to split those memories . . . And a toast to yours as well. Toe, Thank you, Sir. Sunshine, or like fine scratches on eyeglasses an accumulation of wear Aenimal, Ha! Maybe so, maybe so. One of these days . . . at the Great PIP Get-together. Wouldn't that be a blast? h, you have  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Krawdad... love the way it can be interpreted as either a reminder of progress... or a slide so far that even bitter is left behind. *S* Excellent write! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Krawdad - I believe most everyone had a glass like this at one time or another. Nice write... BC |
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