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Strawberry_Princess
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0 posted 2003-08-19 01:04 AM


The sun sets upon the massive mountains as the moon creeps out from afar
The faces of the stars light up as if it was a holiday
Shooting stars far far out fly in the sky as a bird speeding through the clouds
Far above god watches over us as he is and always in our hearts.


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Strawberry_Princess
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1 posted 2003-08-19 01:06 AM


aaah seriously u ppl hate me cmon cut me some slack i'm just a 14 year kid that's bored. i wrote this in 2 minutes!
Strawberry_Princess
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2 posted 2003-08-19 01:08 AM


pssht fine i'm splittin this joint
u guys r so stuck up  ;p

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2003-08-19 01:53 AM


The faces of the stars light up as if it was a holiday

This was very pretty.... except for your replies to yourself.  That wasn't very nice.  Anywhooo, welcome to passions.  

    Stick around, it gets better!


littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
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4 posted 2003-08-19 01:57 AM


The boards fly faster in here than you can imagine . . . please stay - I just responded to one of your other ones.
There are many lovely people here and a lot of excellent writers.  I have grown and learned much here myself

It doesnt matter how quick you write something . . . it is what you feel
or dont when you write it  

14?  Wait until your 20 . . .  

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-08-19 02:33 AM


bye
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-09-18 05:23 AM


Enjoyed...James
garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-09-18 05:28 AM


I hate to tell you this, but 4 minutes is certainly not enough time for you to get so upset about not getting any replies. If you will go to some pages beyond the front page, you will see that there are a lot of poems with just a few replies after days of being on there.

I hope that you decide not to leave.

Hugs  to you  
Ethel

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